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Most Recent Comments by beanerywriters(11,675) FLIGHT LESSONS Tim, This is well ordered. You've compared and contrasted and left the reader to their own conclusion. You've shown the reader and allowed them to be. Your choice of diction is smooth, the elements of culture,the globe, the Scotch mixed with a sprinkle of nature gives the poem balance.... Thoughts While Undergoing an MRI Exam done that, but wasn't warned about the NOISE! WHAT? MARRY A PROSTITUTE, HOSEA ASKED GOD Cousin! The scripture basis for this story was read at my sister Rosemary's wedding 2 years ago. A lovely homily followed with reassurance that it is never too late to start over with God. Thanks for this presentation. HALFWAY THROUGH TOMORROW KATHLEEN YOU SPEAK THE TRUTH...BEAUTIFUL! YOU ARE VERY TALENTED! THANKS, JOAN AT the BUNCH OF GRAPES TAVERN 1787 {Novel #2} Carolyn...You know how I love history! Good WORK! Joan “I told him about the prominent men who see financial promise in speculating on the land west of the (Appalacian)...Appalachian ... Mountains.†YOU SPELLED IT RIGHT IN THE NEXT PARAGRAPH! Your Ohio Company needs to pay the... DAVID PAGE: Notes from St. David's Writer's Conference Carolyn, Thank you for the encouragement, and for the willingness to be open and vulnerable. Since my divorce and transition into what I hope to be womanhood/personhood, I have realized that I too had worn many masks over the years; masks which only covered over who I was truly meant to be.... PERTAINING TO THE SPIRIT Joe, I wasn't on the ball...I have a devotion that speaks to the Native American practice of praying for the seventh generation to come. If we all did that, and took our concern for that seventh generation seriously, we would have a much different world! Now, where did I file that devotion? THE KING AND THE ANGEL This is a really nice piece, and tackles the issues of the day (and past days) really well. Thanks, Joe, for posting it. Shadow of the Earth This piece sends a powerful message. I like your choice of diction. The message is direct and, clear. Nicely written. David A Romance Story Part 4 Good content. Good story. It's almost addictive:). Keep Writing! WE REMAIN NUMBER ONE! The Beanery Online Literary Magazine has always been a great contributor to the ProBlogs site. Congrats and best of luck! BEYOND COMFORT I would like to know what to expect,the dying process.She was diagnost this april.I don't see much hope for her on line or her doctors,they are not telling her how long she has,but he did say you will die from this.Thanks,Todd THE WOOD SHOP Linda, This is a very nice piece. The words flow easy. Good use of diction and syntax. I like that you wrap up the piece with a final conclusion sentence. Keep writing! THE SMART CAR: IS IT SAFE ON AMERICAN ROADS? According to an authority in the automobile business, the Smart car my husband spotted couldn't have been licensed domestically because it can't meet the emissions tests in this country. This car probably sported Canadian license plates and was being driven down from Canada. Carolyn CLAY TREASURES The title caught my attention. Loved the development and ending; for me, the transition between the main body and last "stanza" was abrupt. Been to ruins and not all disintegrate. |
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